This is so adorable. I love the fluffiness and the huge shiny eye. (I sympathize with you. I hate when people show up, go "cute ^^" or, alternately, "love it " and then vanish. Why do they waste the time?)

There's really nothing wrong with the pose that's too obvious. It might look a little off, though, because the middles of her shoulders come down low across her chest, and her elbows start out too far from her body. It's a common mistake, and it always makes a dog/canine look kind of like its forelegs aren't attached. Just try and draw 'em closer next time, and it'll be awesome.

Also-and this really isn't a big concern, because she's drawn slightly cartoonish and it doesn't matter as long as it looks all right-you can keep in mind that dog's paws are slightly upraised, in that they walk on their toes. It's hard to explain; the back of the foot isn't flat, but it curves backwards and upwards to the location of the dewclaw. You'll know what I mean if you take a look at a dog's paw. You don't really have to do this, because it looks fine for its style right now, but it's a big help for when you want to draw more realistic-looking puppies. Keep at it! ...and sorry I blathered on so much. n.n;;

Thank you sooooo much for the help and the comment. I appreciate it.

i like that one!!

::I'd show a smile, but I'm too weak.
I'd share with you, could I only speak,
just how much this hurts me::